I'm so excited to read the second chapter! The first chapter was so... so... GREAT! I can't even describe how great it was. It was very sad, and I sadly relate to the fact that MC had panic attacks, I had panic attacks too for a good while. I hope you have a great morning/afternoon/night and you remember to drink water, eat, and rest when needed!
Hey, sorry you didn’t connect with this story. Just to clarify a couple things: this is a Maronite Catholic family (not Muslim), and there are multiple first name and last name options for players to choose from, all with meanings provided.
Amazing demo. Made me cry. Incredible characters with tightly woven characterization, even with just the glimpses I've seen of them in my playthrough. Prose that sucks you in. This resonated so deeply, it hurt — and I know it will resonate with many, many others, too. Thank you so much for creating and sharing this.
This is an amazing, beautifully written start! I am so excited for more of this, it's so rare to have an IF that is told from a queer perspective and you have no idea how much this means to me as a gay man. I wish you all the luck in this and any future writing, you certainly have the talent worth pursuing.
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Really amazing start I love it!
I need chapter two, like... yesterday this was so good
I haven’t figured out time travel yet, but I’m working on it! That and chapter 2, obviously. ;)
I'm so excited to read the second chapter! The first chapter was so... so... GREAT! I can't even describe how great it was. It was very sad, and I sadly relate to the fact that MC had panic attacks, I had panic attacks too for a good while. I hope you have a great morning/afternoon/night and you remember to drink water, eat, and rest when needed!
Thank you so much! I’m both glad and sorry all at once that you can relate in that way. Take good care of yourself, too! 💜
Hey, sorry you didn’t connect with this story. Just to clarify a couple things: this is a Maronite Catholic family (not Muslim), and there are multiple first name and last name options for players to choose from, all with meanings provided.
Amazing demo. Made me cry. Incredible characters with tightly woven characterization, even with just the glimpses I've seen of them in my playthrough. Prose that sucks you in. This resonated so deeply, it hurt — and I know it will resonate with many, many others, too. Thank you so much for creating and sharing this.
Thank you for this incredible feedback! My walls definitely can’t handle this level of praise! 💜
Actually vibrating like- This demo is amazing I cant wait for more ^^
And I can’t wait to share more!
This is an amazing, beautifully written start! I am so excited for more of this, it's so rare to have an IF that is told from a queer perspective and you have no idea how much this means to me as a gay man. I wish you all the luck in this and any future writing, you certainly have the talent worth pursuing.
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much your comment means to me 💜
It's too damn early for you to be making me cry like this omg. 😭
Sorry not sorry! 😈 But seriously, thank you for caring about the characters that much! It means a lot to me.